The Curse….continued

I apologize for the long delay (if anybody at all cares for the continuation of this story). I was preoccupied with work-related bulls**t I’d rather not elaborate on, and writing (of any form) was the last thing on my mind.

So here it is, the 2nd part of “The Curse”. Enjoy…

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He remembered being told to sit down, before his father started with his narrative. “It is necessary that you do,” his father insisted when he declined. And when he realized how upset and disturbed his father was, he relented and swore to him that he would listen.

“The first Senor Febin Crisostomo dela Vega was born in the Far East, a result of a union between a General and his not-so-Spanish wife. On the day he was born, the midwife was almost sure that the child would not survive at that time, as she was very much aware that the woman’s early labour (and later on, death) was caused by the violent beatings she had received from her high-tempered husband.”

“General dela Vega spoiled his son rotten, and it was actually him who introduced the boy to the world of debauchery. Febin Crisostomo dela Vega grew up to be a troublemaker with an uncontrollable thirst for wine, opium and of course, like is father, bedding women, may they be willing or not. One of these women, was Dulce Mercado, daughter of a Chinese mestizo and an eccentric yet very beautiful woman who was rumored to have descended from one of the famous native kings who had conducted a ‘blood pact’ with the early conquerors. The moment he saw Dulce, he immediately expressed his wanting to have the then fifteen-year old girl to his father.”

“Of course, he got what he wanted. And after ravishing the young girl over and over until he got tired of her, he gave her to his father, who willingly had his fill as well. They left her outside the gates of the Mercado home after the terrible ordeal, naked and defiled, and her sanity gone. Little did they know, that they themselves had marked their own grave, for her mother, Caridad, had knowledge of the ancient forbidden arts of her native ancestors. Somehow she was able to find out who was responsible for her daughter’s fate.”

“Caridad was a brave woman, she confronted the dela Vegas, and told them that they will pay for what they had done to her daughter…They denied everything of course, and laughed at her. After a few days, General dela Vega caught a mysterious disease that the father and son decided to pack their bags and go back to Madrid. The old man’s unusually-expanding stomach seemed to be growing at a very fast rate. They tried to find a doctor that could cure him, but all the specialists could not find out what was actually wrong with the general’s body. He lived long enough to make sure his son marries a daughter of a wealthy family. They found the General’s body the day after his son’s wedding, his stomach seemed to have burst open, with insects, worms and maggots coming out from the flesh…”

“Febin started having nightmares after that. Night after night he dreamt of Caridad telling him that her revenge was not yet over and he will soon be next. And that his sin was too great that his descendants would also have to pay.”

“My son, listen to me. Once you get married the nightmares of Caridad will come. Like myself and the others before me, your firstborn will be male, of which you will name after our ancestor…Trust me, it cannot be helped, you may think of many names, but in the end it is the name Febin Crisostomo that will come out of your lips…The nightmares of Caridad will stop, but pure terror will begin….”

“Unlike you I was not warned by my father. The night after you were born I came to see your mother before I went to sleep in the other room. I remember how she looked so pale and weak…and how I whispered to her that I was proud of her…”

“…When I turned to leave, I felt her strong grip on my arm, and then I saw her eyes…I knew that wasn’t my wife lying there, it was Caridad. She smiled, and with an extraordinary strength she threw me down on the floor. She got up and like a wild animal she started attacking me, and all I could think about was…why wasn’t anybody coming to help me? I tried to run away from her, but I couldn’t, she was too fast, too strong…”

“I called your mother’s name, over and over…hoping that she will come back to her senses…hoping that she will fight to take control of her own body again…I prayed out loud, and the woman laughed and mocked me….In the end, I was forced to…I was forced to…”

He begged his father to stop talking, but the old man continued, “Luckily, if you call it that, it was my father who found me beside your mother’s lifeless body. There were no traces of the commotion that happened that night before…except that is, she was dead. Somehow we were able to convince everybody that her death an accident and it was also only then that my father told me about the curse. And yes, like the others, my father died the same way as our ancestor, the general did.”

Febin remembered coming out of that room and seeing the beautiful face of his Corazon, the love of his life. Then and there he made his decision, “With me, it will be different…”.

Until now, even when years already had passed since that night, people still talk about how he humiliated his fiancee in front of the guests, and how he had turned the whole evening into a disaster. This was the start of his journey to self-destruction. He will not end his life, no…He will pay for his ancestor’s sins in his own way. He will live his life making people see him as they should have seen the great Senor Febin Crisostomo dela Vega and his descendants…and the curse will end with him.

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4 Responses to “The Curse….continued”

  1. Helena says:

    sis kinilabutan na naman ako. ayun akala ko retelling ng zorro ito dahil familiar yung names, gusto ko rin kasi ng mga ganun. Medyo scary pala sya mas maganda.

    Nahurt naman ako sa ginawa nya with Corazon kahit pa may major reason behind his sacrifice..heartbreaking pa din. Buti hindi nangyayari sa real life yung magbabayad ka ng past sins ng mga ninuno mo or hindi nga ba?! nyay!

    update mo ko ulit kung may bago timichan!!

    Helena´s last blog post..Glesy the Great’s Own Version: The Story of the Nativity

  2. love this story a lot!!! walang halong pambobola.. sabihin mo lang sakin kung may balak kang magsulat ng book at bibili ako…

    more.. more.. more… cheers;p-glesy the great

    glesy the great´s last blog post..romance me not…

  3. timi says:

    @Helena: kala mo mala-Zorro ang labas sa umpisa? wahahah!I was inspired by some old beliefs about the defendants paying for the sins of their ancestors…

    @glesy:
    Salamat lang din at nagustuhan nyo…Pag me balak ako magexperiment ulet kukulitin ko kayo…

    I wanted to experiment on this style of writing na common sa mga Spanish lit. Yung may pagka vulgar ang dating na…basta…Heneweiz, may pagkaSpanish lit tapos hinaluan ko ng concepts na mare-recognize ng Pinoy (kulam, history, etc…)…Eto nga ang kinalabasan…

  4. nung binabasa ko to… di ko maexplain pero naassociate ko siya sa “Like water for chocolate” di ko alam kong alam mo yun…. pero dun ko kagad siya nakabit… hehe

    glesy the great´s last blog post..sa ayaw at sa gusto mo, ayaw ko na…

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